Immigration around the world
Nowadays,
immigration is the picture of modern world -travelling from one country to
another-. Immigrants settle down for various reasons, better opportunities
employment, a desire for a better standard of living and future, which are the
main driving forces. Though, in present times, there are several other reasons
like looking for current free education
and seek for political asylum in neutral countries. Nevertheless, the majority
of immigrants suffer from discrimination, they work in illegal jobs and their
wages are low. Finally, they may adapt themselves to a new life style, costumes
and in many cases a new language.
I believe that the phrase "traveling from one country to another" is out of context.
ResponderEliminarAfter "better opportunities employment" I would use the connector "and" to indicate that the list is coming to an end.
Finally, the verb "seek" should end in -ing as "looking".
In my opinion, although “travelling from one country to another “ is used as a synonym of immigration, they do not have the same meaning. Also, a more suitable and complex topic sentence would be needed to focus on the reasons why people immigrate. The arguments are concentrated on giving the reasons of immigration but the two last sentences explain the negative aspects and seem out of context. The concluding sentence does not mean the same as the topic sentence.
ResponderEliminar(Carolina Sarramea)