Tourism in Argentina.
In my
country, tourism is becoming more attractive every year. Many people come from
different countries. In order to see the wonders of our territory from the North
to the South.
To begin with, European tourists enjoy
visiting the Waterfalls located in Misiones, the northeast of our country.
There, people can carry out different activities such as, rafting, walking
through the jungle, you can bird-watching and enjoy the beautiful view of the
waterfalls themselves. Argentina has a wide range weather moving from the south
to the north, another magnificent place to visit is “La Quebrada de Humahuaca”,
in the North of Argentina, where American tourists can learn about our history
and enjoy the picturesque landscapes. Moreover, we have “La Patagonia”, it is
located in the south of Argentina. There, oriental people can visit the
impressive “Glaciar Perito Moreno”.
To
conclude, it is world-widely known that the Republic of Argentina has natural
wonders which will always attract “travelling lovers” so tourism turns over to
be an effective way to make people visit us.
(my version)
Tourism in Argentina.
In my country, there are wonderful places where people from all over the world can have
relaxing holidays with picturesque landscape. If you are looking for an ease
and delightful scene Argentina is the appropriate.
To begin with, European tourists enjoy
visiting the Waterfalls located in Misiones, the northeast of our country.
There, people can carry out different activities such as, rafting, walking
through the jungle, you can bird-watching and enjoy the beautiful view of the
waterfalls themselves. Argentina has a wide range weather moving from the south
to the north, another magnificent place to visit is “La Quebrada de Humahuaca”,
in the North of Argentina, where American tourists can learn about our history
and enjoy the picturesque landscapes. Moreover, we have “La Patagonia”, it is
located in the south of Argentina. There, oriental people can visit the
impressive “Glaciar Perito Moreno.
To sum up,
Argentina is the best alternative to spend an amazing time, because weather moving from the north to the south or
the west to the east, you can find mountains, snow, waters fall and the sea in
the same country.
my mate´s version)
Analysis
Analyzing both paragraphs I notice that my mate´s
sentence and conclusion reflect the same idea. However, the topic sentence does
not explain in detail what the paragraph is going to be about and it is not
related to the body of the writing and the conclusion does not mention the elements
that were mentioned in the topic sentence.
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